"Great speech. I liked the story, and the way you organized the speech. Since I have to give criticism, I will say that you monologue just a bit, which can make most audiences sleepy no matter how amazing the words are. Try to record yourself…"
"Overall, I think your speech was fun, coherent, and meaningful. In addition, I found it easy to listen and to understand your speech, becuase of your interaction with the audience in regards to the eye contact, and the colloquil impression you gave…"
"Absolutely great content, and delivery. Organization requires some technical improvement, such as creating post cards with highlighted information, bold points. Try to practice more and brainstorm on paper and not in your head while speaking.…"
"For her first speech I thought she did extremely well. I thought it was very interesting and well put together. Her delivery was on point and she spoke about her self without giving to much information. I thought she could have made a little more…"
"Content: Good choice of stories, but I don't think there was a need for both of them. Don't get me wrong, they were very enjoyable, but it was really dragged out (nearly twice as long as the normal speech time). I suggest just trying to…"
"Delivery: I know this is the 21st century, but you need to stop using the phone. It ruins your delivery so much, and makes the audience feel lectured (which bores the audience.). Your sense of humor can spice things up, so try to use it instead of…"
"Delivery - As mentioned by Dovi, you did seem a bit uncomfortable getting up there in the beginning. I would suggest re-watching the videos on stage fright (which I am SURE you have already watched) to help ease the stress (it helped me a bit).…"
"Delivery - Your delivery has improved 200%+ since the first week. You are starting to get more comfortable speaking and presenting your thoughts. I would suggest just going over the speech once or twice more beforehand to help enhance the…"
"Content You could have added a lot more to your inro. Intros are meant to capture the the attention of your audience. You started off with your own opinion, should have gotten the class involved in that thereby expanding your intro. You did…"
"Great speech.You have a very good introduction.You gave a good meaning to the story and made good eye contact on your audience.You were comfortable and relaxed telling your story but the end of your speech you became nervous.Next time at the…"
"Hi, it is my assignment to critique your speech and I must say that you made it quite easy for me. Your speech is excellent!
Content: you are doing a great job expressing your point exactly and explicitly. I might have tried to insert a humorous…"
"1) Content- I thought the content was very interesting, I feel that you are right about the fact that we all know on some level the power of unity, but we definitely need to internalize it more, especially the…"
"you started your self-introduction by speaking of yourself . there are some areas where you could explored to make your impromptu speech more effective of telling about yourself more. You might have talked about yourself as a person, like, what do…"