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"Anansi and the Spider: Anansi Goes Fishing," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"Content She had a great story and really made us connect to her life by making it personal. Organization She has a great introduction and body and conclusion. She could use a little more examples and a variety because most of them were personal…"
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Luiza Amramova commented on Richard Green's video
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Self-Introduction Speech on My Grandmother

"Content She gave a wonderful story about her grandmother and really showed how her grandmother affected her life. Her speech makes a clear point that her grandmother taught her working hard brings success. Organization Great attention getting…"
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"Father and Son," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"Content  The thesis statement didn't make a clear statement. You jump  into the story without an attention device opening, thesis, or preview. Your thesis could of been more effective if you added an attention getting. You had one…"
Apr 8
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"The Golden Touch," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"She had a good thesis statement that expressed an idea. She also had a good attention grabber. She was smart and asked a question that related to her and the audience,which is a great way to draw the audience in and get their…"
Apr 5
Eiram Afia commented on Richard Green's video
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"A Big Quiet House," Narrative/Storytelling Warm-Up

"Your speech has a thesis statement and that is "be careful what you wish for". It expresses one main idea and it is very specific. You use the story of the man to support your thesis. This example shows what the thesis statement is all…"
Apr 3
yubin shin commented on Richard Green's video
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"Three Fish," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"Content She had thesis statement that made a statement and she also used specific language to express one main idea. The content was interesting and vivid. She had used examples to emphasize her main idea. Her story was very interesting and she had…"
Apr 1
Luiza Amramova commented on Richard Green's video
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"The Golden Tree," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"The content is brought across effectively. It is very vivid an compelling. However it would be more effective if she had a thesis statement because she went straight into the story. She had organization but it would have been better if she had…"
Apr 1
Moshe Cohen commented on Richard Green's video
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3/3/14: Storytelling Diagnostic Practice for Comments

"Thank you! You can probably be a little bit more criticizing in you critique:)"
Apr 1
Tatiana Shamash commented on Richard Green's video
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3/3/14: Storytelling Diagnostic Practice for Comments

"Your attention getting opening is spot on. I was drawn in from the start. The thesis sticks to your main point but I feel more examples would have further strengthened your speech. The content is interesting and fun. You have great organization in…"
Apr 1
Tatiana Shamash commented on Richard Green's video
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"A Big Quiet House," Narrative/Storytelling Warm-Up

"Content a) The thesis statement did not quite make a statement. You jump right into the story without an attention getting opening, thesis, or preview. b) There is not much evidence. Perhaps a personal touch or story would have been more effective.…"
Apr 1
Shawn Thomas commented on Richard Green's video
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"A Big Quiet House," Narrative/Storytelling Warm-Up

"Your speech had an effective thesis statement. It could've been more effective if it had more sources to express your evidence and more timing."
Apr 1
Shawn Thomas commented on Richard Green's video
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"Father and Son," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"Your thesis statement was effective, it expressed one main idea and used specific language, you showed evidence to support your thesis statement. it could've been more effective if you could've had more examples to support your thesis…"
Apr 1
Ceida Denise Velasquez commented on Richard Green's video
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"Anansi and the Spider: Anansi Goes Fishing," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"   when writing a speech you have to have content meaning a good statement. let the audience know what you are talking about.Give evidence and reasons to prove your statement. Most importantly it has to be interesting.    i like…"
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Sara Amador commented on Richard Green's video
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Self-Introduction Speech on My Grandmother

""I loved your story it is true there is always someone who can impact your life through their handwork,kindness and even a smile. It can make them unforgettable. I loved how you engaged us with the different events of your story. It can makes…"
Mar 28
Stephanie commented on Richard Green's video
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"The Golden Touch," A Narrative/Storytelling Warmup

"Good punch line and great folk tale. You are absolutely right having all the money in the world wont make you entirely happy just because there are things in life that cant be bought with money."
Mar 26

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