Storytelling and Song For English Language Learners
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Good job on the speech. You did start off with a catchy line by posing your idea in question format. Also your words during the first minute were very well composed. I was quite impressed on how smoothly that first minute flowed. However you could have brought your quote in your introduction, instead of waiting till after the story. Further more within your first minute of speaking, you were looking at those flashcards an awful lot. Additionally you could of added more to your conclusion, besides just coining your quote. You could of stated personal experiences or examples of your lesson. Next time give over your speech with a little more emotion. I also feel that your speech was too short. You could of added another minute or two.
I just want to ask your forgiveness in case i was too harsh, especially with the upcoming new year. We should all have a sweet new year!
Don't be afraid, Dovid, (and others), to be even more harsh in your critiques. This is an excellent beginning, Dovid. Thanks for posting.
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