Storytelling and Song For English Language Learners

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Sunday, September, 25, 2011, Fundamentals of Speech 1, Storytelling Warm-up For Student Critiques

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Comment by michael diamantstein on October 3, 2011 at 1:10am
dude you do nothing wrong ! you know how to deliver a speech with time and experience you ll be giving drashas in zuckers
Comment by Smunch Kindelson on September 27, 2011 at 12:50am

Good job on the speech.  You did start off with a catchy line by posing your idea in question format. Also your words during the first minute were very well composed.  I was quite impressed on how smoothly that first minute flowed. However you could have brought your quote in your introduction, instead of waiting till after the story. Further more within your first minute of speaking, you were looking at those flashcards an awful lot. Additionally you could of added more to your conclusion, besides just coining your quote.  You could of stated personal experiences or examples of your lesson. Next time give over your speech with a little more emotion.  I also feel that your speech was too short. You could of added another minute or two.  

I just want to ask your forgiveness in case i was too harsh, especially with the upcoming new year. We should all have a sweet new year!

Comment by Richard Green on September 26, 2011 at 2:55pm

Don't be afraid, Dovid, (and others), to be even more harsh in your critiques. This is an excellent beginning, Dovid. Thanks for posting.

Professor Green

Comment by Dovid Rotblat on September 26, 2011 at 2:42pm
you have an amazing speaking voice, you gave a great speech, even better conclusion just one thing you got to improve on.....CONFIDENCE! i realized that in the beginning you were nervous so you kept on glancing on your note cards because you were unsure of yourself. DON'T BE. it was Fantastic with an amazing lesson that was learned

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