Storytelling and Song For English Language Learners
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THANK YOU, MICHAEL, FOR ORCHESTRATING WHO WILL CRITIQUE WHOM. Kindly keep on top of them!
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Ha, ha, Good Ol' Dovid, Hope you got the assignments straight (don't make me giggle ;-)
Here he is, Professor Green and the Simcha Machine to make it all right again:
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Firstly, i enjoyed very much your topic and lesson, for i as well picked that story bringing out a similar idea . The quote from John L. was also very true and inspirational. Your speech was nicely said. However you need to open up with a catchy line or a joke, in order to catch everyone's attention. Also you said over the story out of order, for first the daughter hugged King Midas and only after did King Midas go over to the river. Further more your words were a little swirled and you were moving your hands a lot. I also think u could of added a better conclusion. Last but not least, your speech was to short. You need to add another minute or two.
With the upcoming new year, I would like to just apologize in case i was to harsh. Please forgive me and we should all have a sweet new year!
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