Storytelling and Song For English Language Learners

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Comment by michael diamantstein on December 27, 2011 at 9:28pm

very solid speech clear and straight to the point . your conclusion summed it up great . thank you mark i want to see the video as well , i wanted to see what it looks like from your guys point of veiw

Comment by Refoel S Levin on December 25, 2011 at 8:08pm

I agree with the aforementioned comment You've progressed into a really good speaker! Your speech contained many great things that other's don't. For example, in chapter 8 in our book it says that one must make a "bond of goodwill," which means make the audience trust you and what you are saying and you do it greatly. Your delivery is flawless without any inconsistencies. Well done! Keep up the great work!!!

Comment by Smunch Kindelson on November 11, 2011 at 1:47am

Oh and does anyone know where Michael Dimondsteins video is? I want to comment on it when the duck is not looking!! No, but really I am supposed to comment on Michael's video.......Michael, himself made the groups.... 

Comment by Smunch Kindelson on November 11, 2011 at 1:43am

Dov, wow, great job!!! I remember your first speech from our first class and wow, your hard work shows. Let me begin with your content- great opening with that rock n roll attention getter. Your thesis statement was clear and to the point, as to what you wanted us to take out of your speech. Even before going into the body of your speech, you had already brought in circumstantial evidence to your thesis statement. Your body was filled with plenty of sources, exceeding the 3 to 5 limit. Next, your organization was perfect. You had the 3 part intro, a 3 part body, finishing with a 3 part conclusion. Even within one of your body topics, you sub-organized that topic into 4 steps- that was great......it made everything so easy to follow. Then in your conclusion you brought out the generalization directly complimenting your thesis statement. Lastly, your delivery was very smooth.....you did not over do the "ums" and you rarely stuttered. I was very impressed with your transition sentence from the body to the conclusion/review- you glided right into the review before anyone even realized you were concluding. Also, you cited everything with a proper source citation. Overall great job, your hard work shows......you probably spent hours preparing, keep up the great work!!!       

Comment by AJ on November 9, 2011 at 6:33pm

Well done! He has great poise and is well organized. He speaks very clearly and maintains eye contact. He grabs the attention of the audience quickly and speaks about an interesting topic. The speech was easy to follow and flowed very nicely.

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