"you gave a coherent and logical argument why MMA "should" be illegal. you gave many great points to support your argument as well. in actuality it was an interesting speech, yet,....why in the world are you swaying back and forth? ants in…"
"very consistent, easy to follow, coherent, and anecdote fitted well with his theme. i found his speech to be a little bit too long however. he could have skimmed half of the story while still maintaining his core theme."
"overall the structure of your speech was very good..your opening statement was good, but your thesis statement could have been a little more to the point. your body brought many strong points which were actually very interesting and informative.…"
"Avi, great job on your speech. you were very consistent, never stuttered, and your enthusiasm didn't sway. the way you gave over the information in your speech was very efficient. i have only one criticism. several times in your speech you…"
"EYE CONTACT!!! i know prof green got a pretty face but that doesn't mean you got to keep looking at him the whole time! i do however have to commemorate you, for the superb use of your car accident case and how it tied in with your quote,…"
"like i have said before, ill say it again, content and oraganization is superb. your speech is informative full of examples, follows a three topic evidence structure yet like before i have to criticize your delivery. Volume and pitch was good, but…"
"Prof green i see you realy want me to lose all my friends by the end of the semester...fine its not i have a social life in college either way.
Ari i already commented on your delivery now for the content. when you told us the story…"
"Evan ready for your critique bashing? you might have made good use of your facial expressions but why are you tucking your hands in your armpits? you cold or something? its 80 degrees outside! plus you kept swaying back and forth, back and…"
"even though i made some concrete points i still think my conclusion could have been better, i slurred my words at times and defiantly i could improve on my speech clarity. people, stay tuned for even better speaking from the students of fundamentals…"
"you have an amazing speaking voice, you gave a great speech, even better conclusion just one thing you got to improve on.....CONFIDENCE! i realized that in the beginning you were nervous so you kept on glancing on your note cards because you were…"